Vision: It's alright. You might need to add more spark so it catches people's eyes. The more you catch em' probably the more points YA get. But it still works. Originality: Perfecto. (I don't know what else) Technique: I like the text. And the background, the purple matches the text choice. But the points need to be a little bigger. But that's nothing major. Impact: Overall impact, it's very good. I bet it will help/ helped a lot of people get points. It would match all of the colors on the page too.